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John Doe
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College Collage
即将推出！ 您快可在这里收听到海外大学生活点滴！
Coming Soon! You can read and hear about overseas college life here soon!
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圣诞广播剧
This is the first Christmas that Andrea is spending in Hong Kong.
It is very different from what she is used to in Boston. Listen to
how she and her family celebrates Christmas...
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听故事, 学英语
Listen to a story and improve your English!
While you listen, you can also read along. Our first story is "Alice in Wonderland" written by Lewis Carroll.
It is a very well-known story from which many plays and movies were made.
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please take the poll about your education level.
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你好! 我是 「轻轻松松学英语」
节目的 John Doe 老师, 要是你在学习英语的话, 有问题可以在这里找答案, 也可以问我, 我每星期都会来答覆。
(注意:目前我祗能在这里回覆, 不能以电邮作答, 请谅!)
Hi! My name is John Doe. if you
are learning English and have a question, you can try to find
the answer here. You can also ask me, and I usually come and
answer questions once a week. (Note: At this time I can only
reply you here and not by email. Sorry!)
- John Doe 老师
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问题 Question :
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bring me to life
2004.05.31
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John Doe ρ畍, 赣ぃhelp me癸癸.thx~
I am happy to see that Alex Fong Lik-sun can delegate Hong Kong to carry the torch for a short distance in this Olympics. I agreed with him he said that he is an Olymian, as well as a singer and well-known face. This is a positive image for teenagers as a good role model.
I think sport is not only a game but also is a compeition. It shows the cooperative of each athlete, or shows the athletes' muscle body, etc.
But the important thing is sport manner. Few athletes may use medicine to win the prize, I don't think this is a fair competition and this is none of the sport manner. Also, the athletes deliberate other's body harm. This is a horrific behavior. In polity, the politician also need sport manner in ran for president and govrn the nation part.
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After I read this new article, I think he is very successful and is a harbinger for growing organic vegetables. Being a organic farmer must has adverture because organic matter is more expensive than normal matter and it may dislike for some people. But I think that work on organic matter can all-round in the future. Because more and more people want to have a health body and take care of it. So, I think the retailing will increase and welcome in the community.
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Hi, "bring me to life",
Here are a few things I have noticed in your writing:1. you should say "Fong Lik-sun represents Hong Kong" rather than "delegate".
2. "I agreed with him he said that he is an Olymian" should be written as "I agree with him when he said that...", or "I agree with his saying that ..."
3. "It shows the cooperative of each athlete" should either be "It shows the cooperation among the athletes" or "It shows the coordination of each athlete."
4. You probably meant "sportsmanship" rather than "sport manner".
5. "Few athletes" is different from "A few athletes". You may want to look that up in a dictionary to see which one you want.
6. "This is a horrific behavior" is better written as "This is horrible behavior."
7. "Being a organic farmer must has adverture" - you have some mistakes in the tenses, and did you mean to use say it is risky (rather than adventureous)? In general perhaps you look up some words in Chinese-English dictionary to use in your writing. You will need to look up how it is used first. So my advice in general is for you to read in English more, and it is good to read aloud. - John
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